This story was written
by Mrs. Feeley's sixth class in Cornamaddy N.S. It is called
"The Ballybridge
Banshee"
Mrs. Cannon finished her story about banshees with the
words "If people saw a banshee they were sure it
meant that a death was about to take place. "The
children laughed at the idea of people believing in an
old lady, combing her hair and keening by night. The things
people believed long ago.
Ciarán looked at his watch. Just a few more seconds
until the bell rang. Aces had planned to meet after school
in Kildorka Wood. He couldn't wait. Ding, ding, ding,
dong, ding. It was Friday. The week of hell and torture
was finally over. They were having a half day but Caitríona
and Ciarán had forgotten to give their parents the note
telling them about it. Shauna was staying overnight in
Cliona's house. Ciarán and Caitríona charged out the gate
and most embarrassingly bumped into Mr. Ryan "Well
I never........Caitríona and Ciarán Carroll running. You
should be ashamed of yourselves. Stay back until the younger
children have gone."
By the time they got out of school Barry Egan's bus
had left so they walked very quickly, sometimes running
down River Road, over Ballybridge and right onto Mill
Road towards Kildorka Wood. Their friends in Aces were
not there. It started to rain. Ciarán glanced around and
spotted the ruins of the old flax mill in the distance.
"Come on, we'll go into the old mill" mumbled
Ciarán. "Or are you scared that it's haunted?"
he jeered. "No I'm not" replied Caitríona. So
they sprinted through the wood and jumped over the wall.
On entering they felt a shiver go down their spines.
It was cold, dark and musty with bits of wool on the ground.
Cobwebs were everywhere and spiders crawled in corners.
All they could think about was the story their Grandad
told them about the ghost of a little boy who was supposed
to haunt this very tower. "I'm scared - suppose there
is a ghost here" stuttered Caitríona. "No there
isn't, don-t tell me you believe in ghosts, Cat,"
groaned Ciarán.
They stood in silence for a few minutes. All they could
hear was each others teeth rattling as if they were about
to crack. As they ventured up the old, rotten, wooden
stairs every step creaked beneath them. Caitríona started
to cry but Ciarán shut her up by placing his shaking hand
over her mouth. Then the children saw something.
They saw a white filigree figure standing before
them. They thought it was a ghost so they darted
down the rotten stairs and dashed home over the
mucky fields. By the time they got home they were
exhausted, wet and dirty.
Their parents were very annoyed. "Where were ye?
We were worried sick. Cliona's Mum rang to let us know
you had a half day" They started "W...w....w..we
missed the bus a..a...and we saw a banshee..." Without
letting them finish they sent them up to their bedrooms.
As they left the kitchen they heard their grandfather
shout "Shut that door." They could smell their
favourite food - spicy chicken curry with no onions. They
were both scared and upset.
It was a dark night and the stars were gloomy in the
sky. Oisín was cuddled up to his teddy and was fast asleep
in his cot. Caitríona and Ciaran were dozing off when
they heard a wailing noise. It gave Caitríona the shivers.
"It is probably just a dog crying" whispered
Ciarán.
They heard it again. Oisín moved under the soft
velvet blanket. The noise continued. It was a screeching,
shivering, piercing and frightening noise. That's
when Caitríona and Ciarán got scared. They tried
to console each other by saying it was Bart annoying
Bubblegum.
On Monday when school was over the children charged
down to the gate where their friends were waiting for
them. Caitríona's friend Jade asked them if they were
going to the old flax mill with Aces. "We went to
Kildorka wood on Friday and ye weren't there. Where were
ye?" "It started to rain so we decided not to
go" replied Jade "Are ye sure ye won't come
to the mill " "No, it's all right" answered
Caitríona. "Then we'll see ye tomorrow" shouted
their friends after them. As Barry Egan drove off his
bus Caitríona whispered to Ciarán "Thank God we're
not going."
Their friends strode to the ruins of the old mill. Matilda
said "I can hear a wailing sound." They jeered
her "There's no such things as Banshees. You know
that". Rocky, Jade's dog followed them but they didn't
realise it. As Rocky entered the mill the old stairs creaked
under him. The children heard the noise, screamed with
fright and ran home.
When they returned to school the following day - Tuesday-
Jade was absolutely devastated. All her friends were asking
her what was wrong with her. "I haven't seen Rocky,
my dog since last night" mumbled Jade. Her friends
were feeling very sorry for her. She went into the class
and then the teacher asked her what was wrong with her.
She was so upset she couldn't answer. Caitríona answered
the question for her.
On Tuesday Ciarán and Caitríona were watching their
T.V. in their bedroom when they heard the wailing noise
again. It seemed to be coming from the old mill far in
the distance. They gazed out the window towards the mill.
Suddenly they noticed a movement. The object seemed to
be floating in the sky. It was a banshee. They rushed
back to bed terrified.
On Wednesday Jade wasn't in school. Their teacher Mrs.
Cannon reported to the class that Rocky had been found
dead earlier that morning under some rubble in the old
flax mill. An eerie silence filled the classroom.